Billy: I think you should write more about the actual relationship between these two characters. it seems like you sort of just explain Zero and X-Ray as people, but you don't really expand on their relationship between each other, if that's what you're trying to do.
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Vinh:I thing that in order to make this post stronger you should include which book you like better. Also, is the other book Eragon written by the same author as this book you are reading now, or are they written by different authors and you are comparing the two because you find good points of comparisons for them?
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